Suggestions I have are that the author add a little more mystery as to who did this, and who did that, so it is more difficult to guess about what happens in the story. I also suggest that the author used different perspectives so you could tell what more than one person was thinking at the same times. One final suggestion I have is that the author made it a little more vague as to who the main "villain" was. These are the only suggestions I had for Divergent. -Alyssa E.
I think if there were not so many characters that came up a lot, the story would be a little less confusing to the reader to know who's doing what. Some of the characters don't really play an important role in this story so they could be taken out. To me, Tris and Tobias (AKA Four) play the most important role. Some of the minor characters could've been taken out. For example, Molly Atwood and Drew (unknown last name) both hate Tris and they were some of Peter's friends. Otherwise, I think the book was very detailed! -Rukmini S.
I think if there were not so many characters that came up a lot, the story would be a little less confusing to the reader to know who's doing what. Some of the characters don't really play an important role in this story so they could be taken out. To me, Tris and Tobias (AKA Four) play the most important role. Some of the minor characters could've been taken out. For example, Molly Atwood and Drew (unknown last name) both hate Tris and they were some of Peter's friends. Otherwise, I think the book was very detailed! -Rukmini S.